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Topic: Last Para., Pg. 1, Mariposa

From: Lukman Clark
Location: Long Beach, CA
Date: 02/16/2010

Disappointing to see that your editor let this go by...

"Outside, the president was still [repeat: still] in the hospital..."

Then, two sentences later she makes a remarkable recovery...

"Fortunately she was out of the woods -- out of the hospital..."


Re: Last Para., Pg. 1, Mariposa

From: Greg Bear
Date: 02/18/2010

Oops! Anyone got a time machine? Thanks, Lukman.

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